Can a female help with my novel when a female student sees an old friend NAKED?

Martin and Daisy were close friends in high school. Although he's a geek, Daisy did always think Martin had a cute, round bubble butt & was attracted to the nerd. Though they went to separate colleges & grew apart, years later during the summer when both are college seniors, Daisy spots her friend Martin at the beach. They start up a conversation. Perfectly normal except---Daisy is in a shoulders to toe wetsuit, while Martin is butt-naked! Daisy knew Martin was shy in high school & that he is clearly embarrassed at this. It's also his first time at a clothing-optional beach. His friends told him to try it out NUDE by himself to get out of his shell because who would know him at a beach 50 miles away? Martin tries to play it cool, hands at his sides, but his shuffling feet and blushing red cheeks give away his true feelings. Daisy thinks it's cute, but is still a little sore at Martin for turning her down as a prom date back in high school to ask a cheerleader (she said no). She heard he's still a virgin. As Daisy...

This poll was created on 2015-02-07 00:44:15 by Monica141414